SHARMA, Akash Coco

Evaluation mark: 5/10

Grade: D

WWW: Your use of media terminology is generally very good and this shows your film and technical knowledge. This will be important for your full MEST2 evaluation as well and is a real top-level signifier.

EBI: Written English is a problem. It’s not so much a case of spelling, punctuation and grammar but rather organisation and paragraphing. This will be a crucial skill if you want to reach the higher grades in your A Levels.  I also think you could have made a lot more of the fact that this didn’t meet the brief. Was your planning really excellent if you didn’t meet the brief? Aside from this, I’d like to see more detailed discussion of specific shots, sounds, transitions etc. and most importantly the impact on the audience. For the top grades, you need to consider this from a variety of perspectives and bring in media theory too.

LR: Copy and paste this feedback into a new blogpost and write three specific aspects you will look to improve for the real MEST2 evaluation in March.

• I will write in more detail and go in depth e.g talking about transitions etc.
• I will make sure that my work is more organised and easy to read e.g punctuation and spelling mistakes. 
• I need to add more facts about the production.